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Re: Unintended Death (working title)
Hi peanut. I totally got distracted mid review and started chilling in chat. *bad lily* But anyways, let’s start with the little stuff! Nipicks It was supposed to be my ...
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: Riddle me this!
I won't lie Rina....all of that smart people talk made my brain hurt.
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Riddle me this!
A hole
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Featured Member December 2009: Kamas
*starts cutting out pieces of cake shaped like Kamas head* Here, have a piece! *snuggleglomploves*
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: A House, A Home.
Okay Smorgs, I’ll try and do my best to help you out with this!!! First off, I really do like this piece and I didn’t find any grammar issues with ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: April showers, bring May flowers....
Hi there Sydney!!! I really like what I see here right away and the concept is definitely a really unique one with the angle that you used. My complaints are ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: I'm Back and Ready to Review!
Doneskies. Anyone else?
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: Strange love
Hey there Young Gun. Lily here as asked. :D A lot of people definitely covered the grammar issues but I would still like to hit on a few subjects. Opening ...
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: Lonely?
I adore this strictly for the fact that this totally freaked me out, but in the cutest way. I think the color is definitely one of the strongest points mostly ...
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: Guess Who! (PG?)
I just wanted to comment on the ones that you altered. The added shading on #1's forehead does make it seem less flat. Empty space is rather distracting in an ...
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: Slide - Photography - [Updated Dec. 6]
Junebuggles, how is it I always forget that you are just about the bestest photographer I may very well know. Ever. The first one, with the flowers, has a wonderful ...
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: Guess Who! (PG?)
Jenna my dear, these are all so super wonderful. And I definitely love Dexter but I’m stumped as to who the other characters are…then again, I generally stick to only ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Coming to Terms
Princess of the Pinkish Oinkerness!!! I know I’m not the best poetry reviewer, but I can smell a good piece of poetry like a fat kid smells bacon. *bad metaphor* ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Fighting Those Dastardly Plot Bunnies
Some writers will sit down at their computer, break out the typewriter, or reach for a fresh sheet of notebook paper and wait for that one great idea to hit ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: I Love Fruit
Honestly, I’m no sure what to think of this poem. I like the idea and the title was definitely catchy, to that I’ll attest. But it definitely jumps around a ...
Dec 2, 2009
