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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Present Past

    Hey there LD! It's clobberin reviewing time! A cat. There it sat. Or rather should I say, there it lay. I love how you opened this with a rhyme. :D ...

    May 18, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: The Critique Boutique

    Hey Suz! Do you mind reviewing this ? It's a short part to a two piece little romance story, like, 700 words. But I could really use an opinion on ...

    May 18, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Apple's Fantastic Review Emporium [Open]

    I Could Really Use a Wish Right Now (1 or 2) It is romance but it's only close to 700 words long and really not all that romantic so I ...

    May 18, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: I Could Really Use a Wish Right Now (1 of 2)

    I'm not entirely sure where I was going with this...even half way there. I still don't know what's going to come next. :? Rated 12+ for some suggestive themes. "I ...

    May 18, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: I Love Reviewing Like a Fat Kid Loves Cake!

    So, after being silly and forgetful, I managed to catch up on all my review requests! And I'm out of school now, which means I can review forever and ever ...

    May 18, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Love, Demise and Last Goodbyes ~ Her

    Super Speed and I'm here! I won't go over this with nitpicks. There wasn't anything terribly significant although you did capitalize 'winter' again! I definitely did enjoy this part more ...

    May 18, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Love, Demise and Last Goodbyes ~ Him

    I'll just make this short, I didn't neglect your reviews, I just forgot to check my WRFF I neglected to find out if I had any review requests! :D And ...

    May 18, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Knight's Secret (2 of 2)

    And here I am again! *wow wasn't that fast?* Hazah! After going ten feet from camp, I heard hoofbeats resonate through the forest. I walked back and dumped the wood ...

    May 18, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Knight's Secret (1 of 2)

    Hey Rosey! I'm soooo super duper sorry about not getting to this sooner. I totally forgot about my WRFF thread and then I got swamped with finals. But on to ...

    May 18, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: A shot of Arrogance (Chapter Two)

    First off Skins, I'm soooooo sorry that it took me so long to get around to getting to your review. I completely forgot about my WRFF thread for like a ...

    May 18, 2010
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: Goosebumps fan-fiction: Night At Murder Mansion, part 3

    Hey there Maddy! I'm sorry I didn't get back to you right away. It's a long story that I've already explained like....three times tonight. I'm not up for doing it ...

    May 18, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Hamsters

    Jenthura, I both laughed and struggled over some math in the course of reading this, but it caught my eye for the topic. I’m a total and complete animal lover, ...

    May 14, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Uniforms, Gunshots, and Other Misfortunes (1)

    'Ello Jane! First off, this actually very gripping at the beginning but I noticed one little flaw, and that was in the use of a sniper rifle. Generally, sniper rifles ...

    May 9, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: K-8 schools

    I went to a K-8 school several years ago, I used to go to a K-5 school, and I now attend a K-12 school. Generally, with a large number of ...

    May 7, 2010
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]

    7/10 Kinda simple. I think someone in my class has something like that as there desktop picture too. **Just made my new avatar like two minutes ago. Be gentle.

    May 7, 2010


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