lilymoore

Well I definitely like the first one best, KAH. But, as you said, neither picture is probably your best. Still, that doesn’t mean that you can’t learn, grow, and become ...

Centaurs are one I haven't seen on the list. I mean, as far as battle goes, they'd be great for speed and all. And one thing to remember is that ...

That is something that took me a long time to figure out too, especially with the whole color/colour thing. That drove me nuts. I used to just think there were ...

Ello Jagged, shall we begin? The world is empty, but there is you, moving and living in this still-life ‘but there is you,’ sounds odd. I mean, I don’t think ...

Mango tango flango!.... :? Flango? Okay! Anyways, I’m Lily and I’m going to review you...whether you like it or not. Opening Line The clown was a girl, but nobody knew. ...

You are right about this needing work, PinguN, but that wouldn’t stop you, would it? I think you have a good base here, but what Prokaryote said made me think. ...

Hello there Final! Lily here to review you to death…well…maybe not to death but, you get what I’m saying, right. First off, as far as typos go, I only spotted ...

A camera is a really great idea. I live in a very rural area so when we drove through Chicago (sort of anyways) I spent a lot of time snapping ...

Yowsers, this is a cool list, Napal! Did you put it together yourself or find it somewhere else? It would be really cool if there were other genres included in ...

OMG, Jenth, these are so cute! *loves elephants* The guy on the left is just adorable. He has a very relaxed look about him. However, he does lack a lot ...

Well hello there, Jane! Here to review the heck out of this! Two thirty in the A.M. and I was the only conscious soul in the house. In the A.M. ...

Hello pencil! It’s nice to make your acquaintance. *hands a cookie* First off, I do want to say that Snoink is right. You leave a lot of questions unanswered. I ...

Oh, hey there TED! First off, the formatting of this is a little difficult to read because it’s a huge block. Paragraphs make things so much easier, visually, to read. ...

Ello MLFA! I had one little, technical comment to make. Your tattoo arm Full of Jesus This sounds funny because I’m pretty sure it should be written ‘Your tattooed arm/covered ...

Hey there Aush! ...and I’m no way near finished my paper. I think you might need the word ‘with’ after ‘finished.’ ...two lamps that sitting on my table, This is ...