lilymoore

Aww! *hugs!* Why does it seem like everything I’ve read today on YWS been kind of sad as of late. However, this is a really unique story line but the ...

Hey there lakegirl! Lily here and I’m going to totally attempt to review this. Okay? Okay! :D So, right off the bat, I’m looking at the layout of this and ...

*grabs newbie and huggles obnoxiously* Aww, it sounds like you’ve obviously had it rough but I think that anyone who is able to write about their own life is stronger ...

Hello you...again! And I finally found two things I could at least sort of nitpick. The wind bites. The wind screams. The wind tantalizes. The wind’s alive. The repetitive feel ...

I’m...absolutely...flabbergasted. This is amazing. I mean, I didn’t even read this because it looked really long but I’m so totally glad that I did read it. That also brings me ...

Hey, you there, remember me! I hope you do but if you don’t, well, that’s okay. But I would be really sad. :( Once I finished this, I did find ...

Hello Cookie ninja monster mabobber! *questions what she just called you* Here as *couch* requested *cough* I’m way too sleepy to read the other eight chapters, but I’ll definitely go ...

Hey there kingo! Around these here parts, they call me Lily! I an not who I truly am. Oops, typo! So, this is very simple and I think you could ...

Aust! How are you doing? *snugs* I think I shall review this! The DJ a guy I knew by sight but not by name. This here is a fragment. All ...

Hi there Paper! I’m Lily and I’m very pleased to finally make your acquaintance. *bows* On to the reviews! *skips over to the review-mobile* There was a flat bed of ...

Eeek, I have to review this. It has my name on it…well…plus an ‘l’ but still. Its bright yellow exterior glowing brightly against the dreary town. You have ‘bright’ and ...

Hi there books! Okay, so, I’m not the best poetry reviewer, but I’m doing my best to learn. And what better way to do that then to practice…on you! Never ...

Hi there, Nicko. Welcome to YWS! I’m pleased to make your acquaintance. *hands out muffins* Anyways, shall I review? I think I shall. :D Her bare feet slapped the wet ...

Honestly, Unknown, this isn’t your most impressive piece that I’ve read of yours. I mean, I can tell that you’re trying to do something new and funky, but this seems ...

Hello ICBF. So, I won’t claim to be an expert poet, but I’ll give it a try, that’s for sure. I try to plunge deeper there are still plenty of ...