lilymoore

Hello A.S. The names Lily, seeing as how I don’t think we’ve ever met before. I’ve seen a lot of birth trees in my day (I mow an acre of ...

Oi, it’s Lily again! Aww, that is a very nifty tombstone. The shape of the tombstone is cool already but to find one with a heart on it like that ...

This poem, it rings a lot of truth, StreetRat. The structure is lovely and the word choice is simple which makes the whole poem really accessible. We all hate the ...

Hi there mister boss man sir. Picture #1 – I just keep wondering: how did you put this together. I mean, did you draw it or photo manipulate it. It ...

Hi there, Hiadel. The names Lily and it’s nice to make your acquaintance. *shakes hands* So, I have some nitpicks! Not get some rest before the sun comes up. I ...

Ooh, Kylan is here! *waves to Kylan* CARNIVAL I really only had one little thing that I pondered over on this and it was with the phrase “depression glass.” What ...

Wow, Talulah, this is actually an idea I’ve attempted to write before so I’ll just let you know how I attempted it, mostly because it wasn’t my idea that failed ...

Hey there magic! Right now, I think you have the very barest bones of a poem set up here. You can really get in here and make this a wonderful ...

Probably one of my favorite opening lines ever is from Christopher Moore's You Suck: A Love Story . I mean when you open a story with: "You bitch, you killed ...

Hi there Abstract and welcome to YWS! Okay, so as far as the poem goes, I like it quite a bit, mostly because it’s kind of dark. But I do ...

Hey there kingo, it’s Lily again! You know what’s really great. I don’t have anything negative to a say about this poem. Heck, I couldn’t even find anything to say ...

Oh My Golgi Bodies, I love this way more than the first version that I read (not that that version was bad, but yeah). :D Mostly though, this improvement comes ...

Hi there girl! Obviously, you’ve edited these but I think you may have over edited them which is something to be careful of. When you over edit a picture, especially ...

I watched horrified as Logan, my sweet Logan, my best friend, held a shot gun level with his father’s face. Okay, opening lines are something I always seem to find ...

Oh My Gilgamesh, it’s Nutty! *screams* So, the first one, does really seem rather…well…blah. Her head and her hands both seem to be disproportionally smaller than the rest of her ...