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Re: Heart
Aww, that's sad. I can't seem to see it either. Did the link to the image maybe become invalid?
Jun 6, 2010 -
Re: Blue Cat's Eyes
Hey there, Durrie. So this is really nifty to look at and read. I don’t know if it’s the size, but the lettering is a little hard to read. I ...
Jun 6, 2010 -
Re: A Hell Within a Paradise
Hi Dante! Come meet me where the shines. All I can say here is HUH??? I have to say, this sounds a little sad and kind of ‘emo.’ Like your ...
Jun 6, 2010 -
Re: alone.
Dalliance, it’s very nice to make your acquaintance. everyone is distant I know there is a rule about this, I just can’t remember the name of the rule. But you ...
Jun 6, 2010 -
Re: Louder
Hello Howler. I don’t believe we’ve ever met but I’m Lily, your friendly neighborhood reviewer. But it does look like Vasticity covered all of the basics of playwriting so I’ll ...
Jun 6, 2010 -
Re: The Warmth and the Summertime / Still Wandering
Hey Holly. Well, since the second picture is the contest submission, I won’t even worry about it right now but I will say a few things, good things :D, about ...
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Re: Apprently, We're Just Good Friends [ExtendedEdition:Updated]
Pingun, how do you do...again. *bows* Okay, I read the first edition but I have to say, this could still really use some depth. Delve into everything about this. Touch ...
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Re: Dreams
Well you can trust, Rina, Violet. She’s always right. About everything . It’s actually a little creepy. But this had a very emotional feel to it and at the same ...
Jun 5, 2010 -
Re: The Angels of WWII
Wowsers Irish! This is a really wonderful picture. The only thing I could say that would have made this picture would have been to see a little more of the ...
Jun 5, 2010 -
Re: Untitled
Hey there Austenite. Since you reviewed “Hemlock” for me, I figured I would review something for you! And I’m going to start with a few nitpicks. Coffee will never be ...
Jun 5, 2010 -
Re: Discovery
Hi there KailaMarie, Lily here to review. You laugh and skip and run like all the other 5 year olds Something I should mention is that numbers should never be ...
Jun 5, 2010 -
Re: Pieces of a Life
Sargsause, hello there! The name’s Lily and I’ll be your reviewer today! Okay, two little nitpicks. The crowded sidewalks of the Fashion District moved like an inky wave of multicolor ...
Jun 5, 2010 -
Re: Flower
Well, Lydia, I think your messing around paid off. It definitely looks like a flower, though the only thing that really doesn’t work with it is the fact that the ...
Jun 5, 2010 -
Re: Don't Hate The Gamer Scene Two
Hey there, I reviewed Scene One, I figured I would come back for a second taste! We've been gone for for hours, Um...yeah, I think you mean the number four, ...
Jun 5, 2010 -
Re: My Anime Girl [Edited]
Hello UV light! This is definitely a nice start. The Goods: The pants and the shirt detail look really nice and very clean. The wrinkles in the shirt look especially ...
Jun 5, 2010
