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  • Art & Photography Re: Heart

    Aww, that's sad. I can't seem to see it either. Did the link to the image maybe become invalid?

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Blue Cat's Eyes

    Hey there, Durrie. So this is really nifty to look at and read. I don’t know if it’s the size, but the lettering is a little hard to read. I ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Hell Within a Paradise

    Hi Dante! Come meet me where the shines. All I can say here is HUH??? I have to say, this sounds a little sad and kind of ‘emo.’ Like your ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: alone.

    Dalliance, it’s very nice to make your acquaintance. everyone is distant I know there is a rule about this, I just can’t remember the name of the rule. But you ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Scripts Re: Louder

    Hello Howler. I don’t believe we’ve ever met but I’m Lily, your friendly neighborhood reviewer. But it does look like Vasticity covered all of the basics of playwriting so I’ll ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: The Warmth and the Summertime / Still Wandering

    Hey Holly. Well, since the second picture is the contest submission, I won’t even worry about it right now but I will say a few things, good things :D, about ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Apprently, We're Just Good Friends [ExtendedEdition:Updated]

    Pingun, how do you do...again. *bows* Okay, I read the first edition but I have to say, this could still really use some depth. Delve into everything about this. Touch ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Dreams

    Well you can trust, Rina, Violet. She’s always right. About everything . It’s actually a little creepy. But this had a very emotional feel to it and at the same ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: The Angels of WWII

    Wowsers Irish! This is a really wonderful picture. The only thing I could say that would have made this picture would have been to see a little more of the ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Untitled

    Hey there Austenite. Since you reviewed “Hemlock” for me, I figured I would review something for you! And I’m going to start with a few nitpicks. Coffee will never be ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Discovery

    Hi there KailaMarie, Lily here to review. You laugh and skip and run like all the other 5 year olds Something I should mention is that numbers should never be ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Pieces of a Life

    Sargsause, hello there! The name’s Lily and I’ll be your reviewer today! Okay, two little nitpicks. The crowded sidewalks of the Fashion District moved like an inky wave of multicolor ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Flower

    Well, Lydia, I think your messing around paid off. It definitely looks like a flower, though the only thing that really doesn’t work with it is the fact that the ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • Scripts Re: Don't Hate The Gamer Scene Two

    Hey there, I reviewed Scene One, I figured I would come back for a second taste! We've been gone for for hours, Um...yeah, I think you mean the number four, ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: My Anime Girl [Edited]

    Hello UV light! This is definitely a nice start. The Goods: The pants and the shirt detail look really nice and very clean. The wrinkles in the shirt look especially ...

    Jun 5, 2010


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