lilymoore

Hi there Books! It’s Lily…again! I really enjoyed this poem. It was simple but it describes a common feeling for…well…any writer when we let ourselves fall too deeply into our ...

Yay, Paladin, you listened to us. Good! legal slavery, legal ties. Price of humanity, I won't buy, price Consistancy is key. If you’re going to start a new sentence with ...

Well, I’m not great with lyrics…but I’ll do my best. Plus, I’ve run out of things to review. So I need to review something! You ain’t gunner stop trying ‘gunner’ ...

Well, grigoris, I’ve never double reviewed anything! That means you’re the firstest! They might also be yellow,Like the eternal gaze Okay, watch your capitalizing and spacing here between ‘yello

More than anything, x3CoFx3, I want to really compliment you on your ending. The woman weeps her failure, and drops the once beautiful apple, along with her dreams, down into ...

Hi there yuri! *hands over a banana* It’s a banana bomb! And I’m the only one who can disarm it! Mwahaha! Okay…I’m going to review now… Good thing, I didn’t ...

Wowzers, Eisha, this is really catchy. I mean, it’s short but it starts the story off with a lot of curios-making. And that’s got me asking questions and wondering, “Hmm, ...

Hi there grigoris! Well…hmm…a letter…hmm. *ponders* it must be really boring for you. Oops. Be careful to capitalize. My dear friend I really don't know how to describe my feelings. ...

Hey there Kat! Oh, and *jaw hits the floor* The cuts in my paper thin, paper skin Vasticity is right here. I mean, I hate repetition. But this just sounds ...

Aww, I like this a lot! And really hope you continue to post lots of these chapters on YWS and that you PM me and let me know whenever a ...

Hello emmy, I’m pretty sure we haven’t met before. *shakes hands* I’m Lily! Here, have some of my cake! *hands a piece of cake* before placing it in front of ...

Hi Junglelover! *waves erratically* Picture 1 – I like this one a lot, right from the start. It just grabbed my attention which is a really good thing obviously. My ...

Wow, Shepherd, your sketches are awesome! The first, of the dogs, is really sweet. You can really see this happiness kind of twinkling in their eyes. It’s really cute. But ...

Hi there, iwrite! My childhood walks away, while I play with plastic toys and get entertained by those same people. I don’t know why, but ‘get’ just sounds dirty here. ...

Hiya, I’m lilymoore, your friendly neighborhood reviewer! Firearris is definitely right. Punctuation is all that this poem lacks. Sometimes you have to look at the poem as if it wasn’t ...