lilymoore

Hiya, River! So, right now, you have a very interesting idea set up. The first super human. But you tell here more than you show. And that’s a big no-no ...

E.B. White! *pounces* So, I’m really trying to understand poetry. I’m doing my best. But this is such a nice change from all those hard to interpret poems I keep ...

Hi there, Navita! I actually don’t think we’ve ever been introduced but I’m Lily! So, I’ve sat here and read this poem over and over and I’m still wondering if ...

Hello, Skorp! *shakes hands* So, I’ll say right of the bat that Kyllorac is dead on. But I understand what you’re trying to do, at least I think so. I’m ...

Hey there water lily! *snuggles for being a lily* So, as far as shading and technique goes, I think this is wonderful. However, I’m guessing that the assignment involved only ...

Hiya Rose! Okay, so this isn’t a bad picture. Actually, this is a really nice picture, but I think that more than anything, you have such a lovely picture here ...

What d'ya think? I'm worried it's too long, naggy and repetitive. I think this is really good. I also think it was really silly of me to use quotes to ...

Well, since you mentioned the notebooks, I may have another suggestion for you. Three Ring Binder! Well, a three ring binder and some dividers. You might have these random pages ...

Hi there Hap. First off, thank you for writing a short story. I love short stories. They make me feel all tickly on the inside. *hands over a plate of ...

I call it the cork wall. Well, called it the cork wall. I had to take it down unfortunately. Anyways, the cork wall that was consisted of four pieces of ...

Hi Emmy! Gosh, Emmy is a cute name. *gives a muffin* So, I think your poem is very sparse right now. Imagine all of the imagery that you can add ...

Aww, the emo in me loves your avatar. Hi Silent Rain, nice to meet you, I’m Lily. *passes out cookies* dragging me down down down down ‘down’ is way too ...

Hello Lena! *bows* And thank you for posting a short story. I’ve been dying for a short story. *dances* Does he forget that the answer is the same every day?” ...

Hello Captain! Arrrg! I’ll say right off the bat that this Alice is especially cute. The colors are nice and the expression on her face is very sweet and charming. ...

E.B. White, you have no idea how happy I am that you posted something! *snugs* So, overall, I think that this is a pleasant piece. I mean, it’s not bad ...