lilymoore

Hey ICBF…I need to think of a better nickname for you. *ponders* Anyways, overall, this is a very charming love poem. I understand that you don’t have to punctuate or ...

I don't know who they are but they are cuuute! 9/10

A classmate of mine lost her little brother very early in his life but even then, she was very young. But when we drive around town, nearly every time we ...

Taylor Swift - I don't even mind her music, I just don't like her eyes. Every time I see her and her weird narrow, slanted eyes, I get freaked out ...

Hello Big Words! So, right off the bat, I had two little nitpicks. And there’s a card on my table that’s inviting me to come back, a card that marks ...

Hey ROC! So, this is a good start, but I know you can do better. :D The story idea is good, but the execution is a little off for a ...

I was kind of wondering the same thing. I found the first four at a garage sale a few weeks back and bought them. (Four hard cover books for a ...

NATE! It’s me opening my mouth again! But it’s a bug, sort of. So, whenever you click on the “View All” under Followers on the left, it lets you see ...

Hi Sarebear! I’m Lily. I’m sure we haven’t met yet, but, well, now we have! :D Now, as far as this story goes, Suz made a lot of good points, ...

Hi there newbie! *hugs the newb* :D So, this is a really short piece and it’s not a lot to work with. The first thing I have to say, though, ...

Well you’re really making me question my love of Ke$ha. I mean, I’ve always been a fan of her music for some reason I can not explain. But something about ...

Hey there UV light bulb! So, since this is a contest entry, I’ll try and be as helpful as possible! ...clear enough for a car to make its way through. ...

Aww, Beff is sixteen and must have just gotten her license, am I right? Or at least close. Because that was exactly how I felt when I got mine last ...

Aww, tell Armando that this was definitely a very sweet story. I won’t be too critical with this or anything but you have to remember that “explode” isn’t really the ...

Well, Auteur, that was just depressing. But it was also well written. The only actual problem that I have with this is that my curiosity is sparked. I can only ...