lilymoore

This just reminds me fifth fifth grade when we read Sadako and the Thousand Paper Cranes and then the class had a project to go and fold 1000 paper cranes. ...

*bumps...again*

Hey peanut! Here because you asked. And because I want to snug you! *snugs* Quickly she pops it in her mouth and swallows, gulping loudly. You should probably throw ‘it’ ...

Zoray! Horay! Hehe, they sound alike. Anyways…a few nitpicks. Tiff appeared about to say something , but, before she could, Eric had pulled her out of the chair, and dragged ...

Please read the first half first. Things make more sense that way. :D Laura glided into Nathaniel’s room, trailed closely by the rest of the coven. She paused next to ...

Hey blackbird! It’s Lily, your number one fan! *waves a big foam finger* :D Okay, first off, a few little itty bitty nitpicks. His finger flex. It should either be: ...

Do you ever just see someone and think to yourself, “I need to write their story.”? Every now and then, it happens where I see someone and I really am ...

*fan girl scream* OMG, its Jooon! :D Also, the whole "eyes" to "tides" thing. You've got great rhyme going there, but you don't have that deep of a connection. I'd ...

Gryph, this is…um…different. Not bad different, just hard to really review different. I definitely like the take on the contest idea with this. It shows a very innocent reflection of ...

*snugs fragile* Welcome Back! *dances*

Hello Mr. Knightly! So, I saw the title of this and I couldn’t resist reviewing it. I’ve never been a huge Zelda fan but I did start playing Twilight Princess ...

Hi June! I don’t think we’ve ever officially met. I’m Lily! Hi. *waves like an idiot* Okay, I really have to give you props on this poem for one very ...

OMG, this is so cute. I can’t really say anything negative about it except for agreeing with what Durrie said with the text really needing to stand out. I think ...

This is a slightly edited version of the piece I submitted for Suzannes vampire contest. Anyways, any advice would be totally appreciated. “Ugh, I hate hippies. I can never get ...

Hi there, soft! I’m Lily. Nice to meet you. :D First off, I should say, you should totally stop by the Welcome Mat and introduce yourself to the rest of ...