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Re: The Puppet
Hey there, Victorian, nice to meet you! Okay, I’ll be short with this and say that you’re really blending prose and poetry here which can make reading and classifying and ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: I've Been Known
I have to be honest with you, Sporkie, and say that right now, I definitely don’t see this being Lit Journal material. Right now this doesn’t really feel particularly poetic. ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Hangover
Hey there, Knightly! Lils here! Because I like this, a lot, I really want to make a few word choice suggestions, most especially with the first stanza. You taste like ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Come Together, Vietnam
Hey there, octocoffee! We’re happy to have you back, even if you don’t get right back onto the review-wagon. No worries! Really, I have a few suggestions I wanted to ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Hello World~
Hello Ally and welcome to the greatest website ever and that is a fact. (Well, it's a fact if all of my opinions count as facts. And if that's the ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Disney Drawings 2
BeAnut! Heya! I figured I haven’t reviewed any art in a while so who better to review then you! And don’t worry, I’ll ignore the camera quality. :D Tangled I ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: When is the best time to post a work?
It's even a good idea to keep an eye on the Leader board. Every now and again, you can sort of notice a pattern where every now and again, a ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: you say
Hey there emoinpink! First off, as far as your flow problem goes, I recommend checking out “Flow” (by Jon) as well the other link he provides inside of the tutorial ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Injuries before death visible after death?
This is just another tip but, even if you don't like the show, check out the autopsy scenes in the CSI (Crime Scene Investigators) television show. They often show things ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Favorite poem?
Tempting to place in coherent collage the bee, the mountain range, the shadow of my hoof - tempting to join them, enlaced by logical vast & shining molecular thought-thread thru ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: How sad is the peacock!
Hi there, Skorpionne. First off, I have to wonder what inspired this, though I’m guessing it was probably…well…a peacock. Yeah, that’s going to be my best guess. Also, I think ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Have Firefox? Get the YWS persona
I could have sworn I put a random comment on this when I made it my persona. Oh well! It looks awesome, everyone. Use this persona!
Jan 19, 2011 -
Re: Cursive Writing: Should it still be taught?
I remember when I learned cursive in 2nd grade. I was in a class of 6 kids, and my best friend had a hand deformity that made it almost impossible ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: What are you listening to at the moment? [2]
"God Smack" by Alice in Chains! I
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: A random fact about yourself
I only know if I really like a guy when I'm suddenly afraid of commitment, paranoid that he's going to leave me, and have had at least one nightmare where ...
Dec 28, 2010
