lilymoore

Parts Four, Five, and Six! There isn’t much I can say about part four right now except I was wondering how it is she got from the window to the ...

Whoot! Part three! (also just realized that these were all posted in the same thread...) SOPHIE (As she's being led away) I don't like going to the dentist. This dialogue ...

I’m baaack. GWENDOLYN Yes, Aunt. Something about this response sounds uncomfortable and not as natural as everything else so some more thought might want to go into this. The same ...

Oi! Sorry it took me a little longer to get to review these. I’ve been shopping for the last two days…bad excuse, probably, but oh well. So, I found myself ...

Heya Shrubs! So, I find myself wondering about at first paragraph at the beginning. It comes off of the bat as seeming more telly then showy and you don’t want ...

Donesies! Who's next?

Heya Tiff! Of course I have time for you! First off, have I mentioned how much I love your willingness to put such personal pieces up on the internet for ...

Heya Jasmine! So, right off the bat, this reminded me of my bestie Taylor (minus the joint smokin’, bottle drinkin’ thing) with the rainbow hair and all, most especially the ...

*takes the closed sign off of the door*

I just noticed that when I click on a users name and try to go to their profile, I get a message that says "The requested user does not exist." ...

Actually, all in all, it was 221.

*vows to put her little boring state on the stats list one day*

As Kitty15 just said a bit ago: Keep in mind that no final decisions will be made for some time as the editors need to read and consider all the ...

MB! I kind of forgot about this but I have a few free days and I did still want to give this a try. If you're still giving until the ...

I had to choose other, mainly because it really is difficult to pick just one. I love romance in a story but I could never read a strictly romantic story. ...