lilymoore

Hello there, NerdBurger! The names lilymoore, nice to meet you! *shakes hands* So, I want to start off by saying that you have a really nice poem here. It took ...

Hey there, Leonie! Glad to see you back and posting on the site. ^.^ So right off the bat, I want to say that I love the idea in this ...

Snoinkers! That piggy is WIN!

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My right ankle or my right foot. I'm not completely decided on which yet but one or the other, Twit!

Hey there, CuteJackRussel! *busts out the giant red pen* Shall I begin? :D Okay, I actually don’t think I’ll be putting any red marks on this, except perhaps this lil’ ...

Hey there, Obsessed! So, I’m not going to sit here and focus much on nitpicks. In fact, I won’t focus on any at all. Really, there aren’t any to focus ...

MilkNCookies gave you a wonderful review, dreams, and pointed out literally, like, everything that I had planned to point out as well. But I do want to touch on the ...

Most of what I do is cut. Once it's all in there, I cut-cut-cut-out every single thing that doesn't, in any way, contribute to the movement and development of the ...

Anger! *glomp* Hey there! So, I did see a few typos here and there but mostly those just involved some places where you forgot an s at the end of ...

Hello, Atticus! Welcome to YWS and I hope you’re enjoying your time on the site! :D So, I have one little comment about a specific line: If I could leave ...

Are you looking for someone to partner up with on a poem? Post your idea or request for a partner down below and reply to requests via wall posts or ...

Hey there, my team mate! If a review is what you want, then a review is what you get! *plus you just turned me on to this awesome song so ...

don’t listen too closely for she’s singing her Suicide song again with a pocket full of posies knotted through her belt loop and ashes [ashes] powdered in her toes. she’s ...

Hehe. This did actually surprise me because I was expecting something not quite like this. It’s very short (which does make it hard to review a bit) but there’s still ...