lilymoore

I'm completely confused but utterly in love with this piece because it has such a resonant voice. Each character is unique and intelligent which is great and I can see ...

This is a very cute piece and it definately brings new, interesting thoughts to ones attention. But you wanna hear a secret, I only read it cause I love Hugh ...

The skinny effect of the picture is done partially through photoshop and partially through putting her in a pair of pants that are like 4 sizes too big. Its like ...

It was complete luck for me. I finally gathered up the gumption to post some of my writing online so I typed in some search words into to google and ...

So, I just found out that, after having been here for like, 2 days my first and only piece of writing is a featured work cause of its nine stars. ...

Name: Already Won Me Genre: Romantic Fiction Summary: Basic teenage romance that developed quite abruptly. Just sort of tries, anyway, to show the way an unconventional romance blossoms. Word Count: ...

Holy wow, 9 stars. Thanks everyone. Now lets see, down to the point of this, thanking everyone and clearing stuff up. Cat_910: Thanks for the star. Okay, I feel really ...

Though I am new to the site, I'm great at critiquing almost any aspect of a story outside of grammar. If you wish, I'll critique your work on aspects of ...

Wow...I mean....Wow, this is really good. Like, in a moving sort of way because its so true. I mean, its something that absolutely anyone can relate to on some level ...

This is my first YWS story submission so please be nice. :? I know I need to work on my first person character (the voice of the story) but I ...

*hehe, wow, ur good* Someone whose soul has a crack running down the middle and all they're magical soul-juice is dripping out. ~trickledblue

I have to agree with Arashi about those lines. Very good. Great imaging and its uniquely vivid even with a lack of adjectives. Very very good. *thumbs up*

Nope. Well, I don't really know, I'm bad at math. So maybe it's yeah. Do I ramble...alot???

Beethoven and a broken cd play. ~lilymoore

I actually really like your characters. They have a good blend of stereotype and non-stereotype to seem very realistic and the whole situation sounds like something from my own high ...