lilymoore

Okay, so here it goes. But I am going to warn you that my reviews are a bit unique. Isaac climbed the stairs warily, his fingers gently intertwining with Lara’s. ...

Ha, don't we all aspire to be famous. Anyway, Night Mistress brought it up but don't forget these two big rules on the sight. #1. The two to one review ...

Yeah, I’ve found something to review that hasn’t been reviewed. It’s sort of my thing. “Sammi, you mean the world to me, you’re so beautiful.” He whispers, Quick punctuation problem ...

If I had only five days to live, I would spend them with my friends, give in to every unambitious activity, and hopeful write one fabulous piece of prose. What ...

Woo, first review! Yeah me! Well, after reading this, I figured that the simplest way to do this is to point out a section where I see a problem, I’ll ...

Ha, well, sense you offered you can review my little short romance piece. Thanks.

Well, I don't normally read poetry but I saw this up in that little box in the top right hand and I figured I should check it out. Anyway, I ...

Ahh, here are the answers I was waiting for. I think that if I had had (needs another had) a knife, I could have sliced the air into chunks and ...

Lies are like a zipper; Made to hold things together, but under strain, hard to keep up. Ha, okay, I absolutely love this opening line. It’s catchy and humorous. The ...

9.5/10

ha, that sounds like me. 7/10 ps. sorry mines soo plain

I've found some of my favorite names from other books actually, especially historical novels. They have a very unique variation of names. Another great place to find names is through ...

HI HI HI HI. First of all, I'm sure you'll feel quite welcome here. I've been around for, like, four days and this place feels like home. And I can't ...

For me, its definitely not a problem to read a book and see that a character is smoking. I'm currently slugging my way through "The Witching Hour" by Anne Rice ...

Hey, uh, yeah, it's me again and no I'm not stalking you. I see you got a decent-length review from CastlesInTheSky so I won't drag on too much and I'll ...