lilymoore

After fifteen years of living in the dark, those first glimpses of sunlight are both blinding and beautiful. But at the same time, after those years in the dark, I ...

So, to everyone who has read and commented on this piece, I want to make it formal in saying that this was a one shot and I really never had ...

A windy whistle from behind me catches me of guard as I turn around to have the beet-red eyes of a shade glaring at me. “Yes?” I manage to screech. ...

In the James Patterson Novels "Maximum Ride" his main character has a clone. So, in a way of changing the names, he calls the original "Max" and the clone "Max ...

Because you're trying to get your review count up, I'll give you something to review of mine. I really want you and peanut to have a big break. :D

I decided to try and compare my crits with some of the people on the lists and I kind of feel that every bodies critiques have they're own way of ...

I think everyone has that problem, so don't worry about it. In the last 4 months, I've only written 2 pieces because the inspiration hasn't been there. However, I'm finding ...

ummm....light brown hair, brown eyes, average height. that quicky sort of cute.

I really would like to see some more of this. It definitely has a lot of potential to really branch into something special. And I'm glad to brightened up your ...

Wow Rosey *gives a big thank you hug and tosses a billion cookies her way* this is an exhalent guide. I’ll definitely remember to link people this way when they ...

This was beautifully executed and I couldn't find any flaws in this piece. It grabbed me almost immediate just cause I have always had an interest in ESP abilities and, ...

Because this is so short it’s definitely hard to give a very detailed opinion on this. But that first line definitely had me pulled in, even if it doesn’t completely ...

Ha, I love Charlie Brown. First off, since mhmmcolleenx0 got around to giving you the rules, I won't go there. Second, you and Saphirra have a great opportunity to really ...

Well, then it sounds like your gonna fit in just splendidly. Not only that but for a newbie, you have far more reviews then most have, which is cool. We ...

Wow, people are big on the "wild amount of rules and advice and such" today. :D However, lilymoore does not sit idly by while other users baby our newbies. Nope, ...