lilymoore

Here as requested. *bows* What I really want to do is dive in and do a line by line critique, at least where problems are present. So, shall I begin. ...

Aww, that kitty really is adorable. Below is my late pet rat, Bennie "Takun" The Rat. I named her Takun but my grandpa named her Bennie the Rat and it ...

YWS has definately helped me grow as a writer, even if I've only ever posted hand full of writing pieces, I think I may have actually progressed more simply by ...

I was wondering, where exactly do some of you find your fun layouts that are different from those that are offered through the site? Also, how do you set one ...

I really like this. Though I was quite ambitious enough to go and examine the original, I can say with certainty that this is amazing. “Ray, if—hypothetically, of course, I ...

So, I had a thread up some time ago. However, it went pretty ignored and eventually got burried under the newer and more popular threads. Still, I decide to begin ...

Banned for not having a black and white avatar.

Hey there Blink. Here to give my humble opinion. Really, I just had a one particular nit pick and that was an issue of word choice. The trees are shimmying ...

I have to say, this was really good, and though I'm not as gifted as most critics on YWS, I can say that I didn't see any glaring grammar errors. ...

Pat Buchanan seemed like the closest thing to a maybe, so I clicked it.

She isn't. Wow, I've seen the movie on Disney like, 20 times, so I just assumed it was. Like, whoah. I can't believe it. Well, then, probably Bell. She's cool ...

I did most of it with some pictures I found through a photoshopping program that I found online along with some stock photos online and paint program. what actually took ...

Can you say "Someones not going to wake up with eyebrows". Oh yes, plotting evil plots. WWYDI you lost both of your arms and your feet and were no longer ...

How did you forget Anastasia?!?! *runs about just outraged* She has to be, by far the most charming of the princesses because she is so very gullible but still very ...

I've got a say, this was a very catchy piece. I didn't spot any glaring grammar errors but then again, grammar isn't my strong suit so what am I saying, ...