lilymoore

Nala was a tool of destiny. Her only responsibility was to separate the soul from the body and pass the soul on to the white-winged Angels of Deliverance who would ...

Hey there and welcome to YWS, the only writing society smoothered in awesomesauce! First off, let me just say, you are by no means the oldest individual on YWS nor ...

Hiya! So, I’ve been stalking all of Cal’s Contest submissions and it seemed about time to review this one. First off, “Face Down” is a wonderful song. I’m a huge ...

Hey, I’m sorry this took me so long to get around to reading. I had stopped checking my “Will Review” thread because I hadn’t gotten any response to it in ...

For being a creation of insomnia and a sugar high, this isn’t bad. Actually, I found it rather comical yet thought provoking (but only a little.) In fact, it was ...

Hey Megan, as asked, here I am. First off, I want to say, that I’m not generally the best poetry critique but I’ll try my best. But you don’t have ...

“When you lose hope, evil is first in line to fill your heart. And once it has a grasp on you, it will never let go,” warned the old woman ...

Banned for being a blue. Sorry, but whatever's going on, I'm totally siding with the purps.

Hey look, it’s another submission for Cal’s contest. I think I just reviewed another one of these about five minutes ago. Elizabeth Spry walked away from the cemetery, the train ...

Hey Jared, first off, I want to say that the song Masquerade is by far one of the most inspirational songs I’ve ever heard and I never would have expected ...

Banned for living in The World of Inbetween Points. I can't even find it on google maps.

Oh My Goodness this is the most coolsies (also a word, its in the dictionary, I swear) thing I've very seen. You deserve, like, a gold medal or something for ...

Funsies! (yes, that is a word) But I don't know what I would do with a foam name....What would you do with one?

?/10....i don't get it...

This is cool. It reminds me of the comic attitude that Christopher Moore uses throughout his works, dark but funny. Not only that but the tone of it reminds me ...