lilymoore

I’m back and yes, I had plenty of time to come review this for you. Here, I honestly don’t have any nitpicks here. This part is far shorter and that ...

First off, Wooster, your avatar is a major distraction, have I ever mentioned it. You can just get so distracted staring at those shifting faces. Second, well, I’m sorry it ...

Hey Tex! First off, I will give an opinion on art, though I’m not the greatest critic! (should put that in Will Review For Food thread) Picture One: I love ...

This is too cute. It’s very bubbly and cartoon-like. One thing I want to look at is the hand that is visible. It seems to be the wrong shape. Almost ...

I’m back Scribe! The two words could not have been more flat, empty or cold. Even among other vampires, Vanaman was not welcome. His hair writhed in a tangled mess, ...

Hey Scribe, told you I would review it and here I am. *run tackles Scribe* The sky was a shroud of heavy shades of black, red, blue, shifting uneasily, empty ...

Oh come on, anyone else. *shameless bump*

Okay, so this is actually really really big. I won’t lie about that. Try using a program like next time you post your art. I did it myself so that ...

So, you ask for a harsh critique but I can’t seem to do it because this is wonderful (at least as far as the imagery goes) and it has a ...

It’s today. Today is the day when I’m supposed to return to the place I came from. This is a wonderful opening. Not too much is given away but enough ...

This is actually a rather old piece. I posted it back in November when I first joined but GoldenQuill revived it. ^^ I actually haven't posted anything recently but if ...

Hey Sarah! Review time. Plus, I’m sort of trying to keep up with June so power review. In front of me lightening lit up the sky like the fireworks we ...

Kama! *runs and tackles kama* Hi! I was on my way to the doctor’s to refill my medication that calmed my Panic Disorder. Too many “my’s”! eek! My best recommendation ...

Jon made a good point about the altering of colors and such. This would be a far more powerful picture if it were cropped with less of the pedestal in ...

Hey Aush, chapter 4 is read and I’m rearing to review. First of all, *announces* this is your shortest chapter yet with only 4,376 words. I thought it read faster ...