lilymoore

Done to the power of 12 tnme22! Who else??

Hey, last one. Same idea, different lyric set. #4. The Truth I gave you a chance And you shot it down I don’t know what I’m supposed to say Was ...

Okay, Part 2. I’m just going to do what I did with the first one. Here it goes. #2. Your Backyard We had a good four years But then things ...

Hey tnme, I’m here, do no fear. Anyway, because there is so much in each post, I’m just going to go through each song individually and comment on things that ...

This is gooood! Cherry blossums, spring rain , whore’s skin, you pray for the chance to experience that again, not knowing if you will be answered by sweet voices, or ...

The line art is delightful here and the pose capturing a specific moment in time is great though I have to agree, it does seem rather romantic. Maybe it’s the ...

Hey Rascal. Not going to nitpick but I am point to touch on the big stuff and ramble senselessly in the hope of making sense and getting the point I ...

LogicalNonsense (it's a chat thing) TypoQueen (also cause of bolt) Mispelt (cause I'm the typo queen) lil( short, sweet, and too the point)

Eeek! Sorry, I know I shouldn't have been hiding under the bed, but I couldn't resist. Anything to make me not go up there alone, I tried. This reads so ...

Hi there hero! I won’t get too into detail here as most of the nitpicks have been made but I’ll touch briefly on some things. Detail There are some places ...

I’m not the best judge of poetry Kyllorac but I had to review this at least a little when I saw the name Laura-Lee. My best friend from grade school ...

Okay, I have to admit, there is something mildly sadistic in this story Anti. Setting I’m not really sure where we are. At some points in the story, the setting ...

My only real concern is in proportion. The head seems rather small in respects to the neck, which seems almost a little too wide. The same goes for the hands, ...

I will do lyrics tnme22 and I also do art and photography.

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