lilymoore

This isn’t bad but I have to say, please don’t post whole works in bold print. It can be a distraction and an eyesore. Normally, I despise repetition like this, ...

A good editor will work with you and listen to what you have to say about what you wrote. If you don’t like the change that they’ve made (and you ...

Okay, first thing I have to say is that I know drawing anything at all on Paint can be tricky. The best I could ever do was make balloons, and ...

I think that it’s a matter of balance between the two. Without soul, the story, characters, and emotions seem dead. It’s one of the reasons I think so many readers ...

Hey there Monument! Lily here and it’s time for reviewing! *jumps into the reviewmobile* AWAY! The rapist wants to take your body to satisfy his diabolical ends. he only wants ...

Would you please review me Tex! Its art. All the links lead to the site because I can't post them outside DA due to copy right. Thanks!!

Hey there Roo, the names lily and I

First of all, the theme is good and very simple. Its refreshing to see a poem that has such an uncluttered, basic theme. A bridge of colors hangs motionless in ...

First off, your right about the hands being out of proportion but not so much with the scarf. The disproportion in the scarf gives it a very over dramatized, humorous ...

Shina! I’m back! “Boy, I did I great job, didn’t I?” “Boy, I did a great job, didn’t I?” It made me wonder if it was the volcanoes doing or ...

Done and Done! Anymore. Come on folks, swarm to me!

Hey Shina! Don’t fear, it’s just Lily. ^^ A stream of crimson surged down the coward's face, forming a pool of the substance below his face. The repetition of ‘face’ ...

Offically time for the strangest review I've ever set up... 1.The barrel of the gun is very squished and seems almost crooked. 2. There is something green here. But what ...

Thank you Junebug...but I have two new ones, and I figured it would be easier to just post them into this one. Midnight Angel Well, I wanted to do something ...

No problem. I think I still owe cookies to someone...oh well...*throws some cookies* Anyone else want a review?