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lilymoore

  • General Fiction Novels Re: flesh : part one.

    Hey, I’m here. I was about to review but had to mow the lawn. Anyway… First of all, your introduction was brilliant and the power within it is so heartfelt ...

    Jul 6, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Dreams Really Do Come True…Kinda

    *jabs jabber* Hey, it’s reviewin time. Rosey had some wonderful things to say but I did have a couple of more to bring up. The orange tabby didn’t clean her ...

    Jul 5, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: I give out reviews

    *Tosses a cookie to spike* Done. Come on people, I need something to review...please. ^^

    Jul 5, 2009
  • Other Re: An Autobiography

    Hey spike, here as requested. ^^ Nitpicks say something what we want everyone to hear, etc. I think you meant “that” The feelings I have accumulated in me for my ...

    Jul 4, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Than You

    Hey unster. I read this way back when you first wrote this but I never got around to writing down a review for it. But I’m here now, I just ...

    Jul 3, 2009
  • Other Re: Tick. Tock.

    Hey cnvalambrosia, never fear, lily here…on second thought, that might be cause to fear. ^^ grrr So I won’t nitpick because there isn’t much to nitpick upon here. In fact, ...

    Jul 2, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: I give out reviews

    Done and Done. Any more?

    Jul 2, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Compulsive Disorder of the Obsessive Variety II

    Hey part two. Awesome! Because I didn’t find any nitpicks grammatically or style wise aside from one, and that was your typo which was already pointed out, I’m just going ...

    Jul 2, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Compulsive Disorder of the Obsessive Variety

    So I have to say right from the start that I

    Jul 2, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Beep

    Rosey! I figured that this would be a great story to make my first review as a purple. So here goes. Little Things I was it desperately. I think you ...

    Jul 2, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: I give out reviews

    I hate being on page too. Can we all say shameless bumping here? *bump bump bump*

    Jul 2, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello all :]

    Welcome to YWS Ashli. So, tell us a little more about yourself. Favorite: Book? Author? Genre? Movie? Food? *pokes the newbie* Also, before you go posting too much on the ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Mini Waterfall

    So, you’ve captured a wonderful moment here with a natural wonder like the waterfall. I don’t have much to say on the negatives except for the fact that the upper ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Untitled

    Hey there shy! So, I checked out the site first of all and it looks awesome. There’s not much there, but it looks very cool. Anyway, on to the review. ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Reach out and touch... some Newbie's hand...

    Snoink dear, he said clock work mask, not maze. *reaches out and pokes the newb* Why hello there DFR! (Your username is long, give me a break.) mhmm got the ...

    Jul 1, 2009


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