lillianna

thanks for stopping by! you got everything completely right. thank you for taking the time to read this and dig deep into this. have a wonderful evening.

thank you for stopping by. i%u2019m so glad you can relate. it%u2019s my emotions right now in the rawest form. have a lovely day!

thanks so much for reviewing! i am so glad you liked the first stanza. i also agree that some parts don%u2019t flow very well, and i as i read through ...

thanks. the tone was meant to be very sad, yet hopeful. you got that so right! it%u2019s about me actually, so thanks for wanting to help. love is very difficult ...

thanks for another review!

hey! yeah, i%u2019ve gotten a lot of comments about how funky this looks, and in real life, it%u2019s wayyy darker. thanks for the insight though! have a lovely day!

thanks for reviewing! i will take it all into consideration. have a great day!

hi! it was supposed to be more of my emotions, haha. thanks for all the positive feedback!! and thanks for reviewing!

thanks for stopping by! i was afraid of too much imagery, but now i think that it was too little. as for the formatting, i didn%u2019t know how to do ...

so sorry for commenting again, but i had an error and it posted twice!!

wow

thanks for the tip on formatting! next i will try more figurative language because i absolutely love using it! thanks for stopping by!

so at the end, it won’t let me type the final “n” in “porcelain”

thanks for reviewing! i hope you have a good day too!

thanks for coming for another review! the detailing on the photo that i referenced was very minimal, yet busy. also, light when i took this, not the best. but i ...