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Re: Symbiosis
psych Marshall whines a lot, but he’s usually not very picky. Offer him the choice of dogs or cats, picture books or lengthy novels, Hamburgers or cheese burgers and he’ll ...
Jun 12, 2009 -
Re: I remember
I really love this (: It paints a wonderful picture of hurt and (my favorite) teenage angst(yay!) The ending is very poignant, but also a little vague...I think if you ...
Jun 12, 2009 -
Re: Lord and Lady
I really like it, and I disagree, i think It makes perfect sense, but vague. I think, though, thats it adds to the overall poem, its vagueness...I really Enjoy the ...
Jun 12, 2009 -
Re: Chocolate
This is my first piece on YWS-what did you think?
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: Chocolate
That boy is like chocolate sweet but forbidding in his ways If he spared me a glance I think I might Melt In his glare And-With eye's like Mocca And ...
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: what I left behind
this is wonderful! I really enjoy the emotion in it, and love the way you used your words, it is, indeed, very solom, but I congratulate you in a wonderful ...
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: Hola Chica's and senors! (ps. I'm not Spanish)
Hi! I'm new here and have nooooo idea what i'm doing (so i'm sorry if I screwed up -_-) But, well, hi! I love writing realistic Fiction,so..um. Yeah! :D
Jun 11, 2009
