lilfeather2749

Hello-this is my first time posting to *shining eyes* Advanced Critiques , so, please, be mean to me. Tell me whats wronge with My story, why you hate it and ...

No plagiarizing. - Snoink

No plagiarizing. - Snoink

No plagiarizing. - Snoink

No plagiarizing. - Snoink

No plagiarizing. - Snoink

No plagiarizing. - Snoink

I love it! It paints a perfect (if not melo-dramatic) picture, and I think You did a wonderful job! I adore your word choice, even if it is slightly dark, ...

Oh wow, this is really beautiful! I absolutely love your word choice, it paints a perfect (if not melo-dramatic) picture! The only thing I think you could have done a ...

Hell yes! This is amazing, and truthfully, it reminds me of a hip-hop song, and its really great! You're right, men have to understand, us girls can kick ass, and ...

Oh wow, this is really very good! I love how it captures your feelings as well as, what I feel, every artist (whether they be a painter or writer) feels...wonderful ...

Happy together once again, dancing down the leafy lane. Let it lightning, let it thunder, nothing will quell the spell we're under...words of love fall into rhyme, we long for ...

I've read all of Ellen's novels, and I loved them all, especially Impulse. I am VERY excited for her upcoming Novel, Tricks, about teenage prostitution. I think Ellen will really ...

I have a story and no one has told me how I can get Better! Help! Read and Review... PLEASE

Hmmmm, I like it! Its very strait forward with out being over bearing, and vague with out being distant, all in all, its a perfect combo! The only part that ...