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Re: S y m b i o s i s
Hello-this is my first time posting to *shining eyes* Advanced Critiques , so, please, be mean to me. Tell me whats wronge with My story, why you hate it and ...
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: Staccato Slut
No plagiarizing. - Snoink
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: Abducted
No plagiarizing. - Snoink
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: Aegis
No plagiarizing. - Snoink
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: The Plague Driven. Prologue
No plagiarizing. - Snoink
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: The Cut - Very Short Fiction
No plagiarizing. - Snoink
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: Deception by the Viledee
No plagiarizing. - Snoink
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: Zero
I love it! It paints a perfect (if not melo-dramatic) picture, and I think You did a wonderful job! I adore your word choice, even if it is slightly dark, ...
Jun 14, 2009 -
Re: In Finitum
Oh wow, this is really beautiful! I absolutely love your word choice, it paints a perfect (if not melo-dramatic) picture! The only thing I think you could have done a ...
Jun 14, 2009 -
Re: "Respect of being a female"
Hell yes! This is amazing, and truthfully, it reminds me of a hip-hop song, and its really great! You're right, men have to understand, us girls can kick ass, and ...
Jun 14, 2009 -
Re: My Own Place
Oh wow, this is really very good! I love how it captures your feelings as well as, what I feel, every artist (whether they be a painter or writer) feels...wonderful ...
Jun 14, 2009 -
Re: Summer Love
Happy together once again, dancing down the leafy lane. Let it lightning, let it thunder, nothing will quell the spell we're under...words of love fall into rhyme, we long for ...
Jun 12, 2009 -
Re: Ellen Hopkins
I've read all of Ellen's novels, and I loved them all, especially Impulse. I am VERY excited for her upcoming Novel, Tricks, about teenage prostitution. I think Ellen will really ...
Jun 12, 2009 -
Re: For anyone not Afraid to read something Angsty and long
I have a story and no one has told me how I can get Better! Help! Read and Review... PLEASE
Jun 12, 2009 -
Re: My secret
Hmmmm, I like it! Its very strait forward with out being over bearing, and vague with out being distant, all in all, its a perfect combo! The only part that ...
Jun 12, 2009