lilchoma

oh dear, that was a typo actually...and thank you much for your review, it was very encouraging...

oh, im sorry if it came across that way...no, that's not what i was trying to say. i was just trying to get out all my frustrations with the world's ...

thank you, that critique was much more helpful...even though there were some things that i didn't agree with. i saw where you are coming from on the second paragraph, but ...

thank you galerius...i did realize before i posted it that it didn't quite look like a poem, but it wasn't fiction, and i didn't feel like it belonged under nonfiction, ...

I really like this poem...its slightly disturbing, but that didn't bother me so much becuase it is well written, and tells an interesting story. your descriptions were very vivid, and ...

I like this poem...it's short, but I think that's okay becuase it's just really simple and sweet...nice job.

KK, thanks for the advice, I'll certainly put those points in the back of mind for my next poem...and olivia, i'm really glad you were drawn by my title, and ...

Thanks for the advice. Yes, I realize that my title isn't very self-explanatory, so I guess I kind of wrote it for myself. The idea is that this poem is ...

Well thank you so much! I'm glad you decided to review something, becuase I love getting feedback (especially when it's positive and encouraging). Thanks!

Thank's so much for the review...a paint just means a kind of horse, that's what i was talking about. And I know, I never really liked that last line with ...

Thank you so much for your encouragment. It really made my day!

Thank you for the feedback, i really appreciate it.

I really love this poem, mostly becuase it sounds exactly like myself. I can totally relate to this kind of experience, and you just put it into a bunch of ...

Thanks so much for the review and advice. I really appreciate getting feedback on my work, because I don't often get other people's opinions. I usually just have to judge ...

I enjoyed the rhyme scheme very much, and i liked that the descriptive language you used wasn't arcane like a lot of poetry tends to be these days...nice job