lilcanich

Thank you very much, that means a lot.

Thanks for your review, the ellipses on the lines "Sticks... stones/Sticks... and Stones?'" reads more as a fast comma now, and it flows much better. Thank you for bringing that ...

I fixed it, I actually had to delete the bold face from each line in the source code, annoying, but done.

Thanks for your input, I apologize for the bold face, for some reason it wouldn't let me disable it. On the topic of poetic inversion, my poem is read more ...

Thanks for you input. I decided to upload the clean version in light of it. Thanks. Lilcanich

Thanks for your input, the "Sun" vs "sun" was actually a typo when I uploaded it, and didn't really notice it. As I said in my response to Rosey, this ...

Thank you very much for your critique, you are correct in your analysis. I did do the word play consciously, keep in mind, this was a freeverse, completely made up ...