lilbluejay

Wow that was suspensful. I don't think I can fix any grammer. But I think it would be good to explain or to take out the part of you being ...

To find love and make every second count To be loved, and to be happy, to die with no regrets. To have some one walk with you, to the steps ...

I loved this, it had its own way of flowing together, the one thing I would change is the part when it says "Fun guests" I just don't think it ...

Great Poem, i loved the way that you wrote this having each word flow into the next. The one thing to change is not to use big words in such ...

it was a good poem, i think that when you right something, re-read it 10 times or so, to see what types of words you can change to make it ...

Her big brown eyes looked up at me, and though it was the dead of night, you could still see her frozen cheeks, were the winter wind had kissed them ...