lilactree

First of all, i like your detail. your peom gave me a vivid picture of what you are describing. I think i liked the last stanza the most. I think ...

Those lyrics have real potential. They really flow together and make a good overall song. Also, i love how you said the first stanza is like the last stanza; it ...

Hey, so basically my review can be described in one word : WOW. Your peom describes in wonderful detail and i get this feeling of raw emotion. It's one of ...

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i love it so far. its got good explanation that creates vivid images in my mind so great job. its also fun to read; sexy. i also love how you've ...

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