lil_orange

Hi, Kinla! I have to tell you that English isn't my native language, so I could be wrong, but there are some minor things in this you might want to ...

Most of what I could critique in this was already said before me. Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that I'm also Hungarian, and it felt familiar how ...

Hi, I'm Orange, nice to meet you! So, let's see if I can help you somewhat... First, I think you should give this a real title, so that the reader ...

Hi, my name is Orange. Welcome to YWS! :) Durrie is right, you have to split this into paragraphs, otherwise it's very hard to read. We need to feel the ...

Hi SitaLon, I'm Orange, nice to meet you! I have to admit that English isn't my native language either, so I'll leave your grammar and stlye to others to correct, ...

I liked your work, but I have to agree with Jetpack on it being too denotative. In the first paragraph you develop your thoughts nicely, but maybe you should give ...

Thank you for telling me the rules, they're not that hard to observe. :) I feel the same about meeting people out of my country. To answer your question, I'm ...

Seventy Times Seven by Brand New "I remember I kept thinking that I know you never would And now I know I want to kill you like only a best ...

"The best way to send information is to wrap it up in a person." I'm not sure if this counts as a writing tip, but it helps me to get ...

Hello everyone! As you can probably tell, I'm new here and haven't really done anything yet, but I'm looking forward to being a part of YWS. I found this site ...