lil-mizzkitty1

Hey guys. This is Chapter 2. So in this chapter I decided to start the action part of this story. I hope you don’t think I changing too quickly (you ...

HI I LOVE THIS STORY I MEAN IM TOTALLY ADDICTED ITS JUST SO GREAT I LOVE THAT YOU HAVE SHOWN US A SIDE TO Mariadelle. ONE THAT BELIEVES IN RIGHT ...

I'm excited coz im gonna finish the next chapter of my story today!!

Hi guys chapter 2! I’ve decided to separate this chapter into 3 parts. Beach-home -school also I dumped the idea of a romantic interest. If you knew how bad I ...

OH MY GOD WOW GREAT CHAPTER. I LOVE THE PART ABOUT THE RING IT GIVES A WEIRD TWIST TO THE STORY. THE DUKE WARRINGTON IS EVIL. BUT ITS GREAT NOW ...

HI, THAT WAS GREAT. I LOVE YOU MAKE US FEEL LIKE WE'RE WITH HER. FOLLOWING HER PAIN. YOU'RE DESCRIPTION IS FANTASTIC. IT IN THIS CHAPTER AND THE OTHERS. ITS GREAT ...

Hi this is my second chapter and will talk about Erin's day to day life. Hope you like and feel free to be harsh in your reviews. ................................................... Erin closed ...

hi love the story. great setting. i almost felt as if i was there. the description was is very sad that the boy's mum and dad die in tragic circumstances. ...

hi wow that was a great story i love the way the murderer sounded so posh. it was really creepy (in as good way). the murderer in most story is ...

hi i love the chocolate becoming the addiction thing. to tell you the truth even in these times chocolate is used to burn all burden. i also would like to ...

welcome to YWS this is a great piece. i love the fact that its so short because it gives you time to think about what the future holds also i ...

hi i agree with the bookslug:) kyra is just something that JK Rowling could have added in the first book ands it wouldn't have made any difference in the outcome ...

hi loved this chapter its different to the others though. i was wondering was the reason she kissed the Duke as a kind of revenge? like in the other episodes ...

Hey this is the prologue it includes my sneak peak and tells you what happened in the years after the murder. …………………………………………….. Erin ran through the hallway. She hi

hi guys ,the reason that there is no introduction is because the second chapter will talk about her life a few years from now. when she's 14-15 years old (she's ...