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Re: Hills of Roses - Introduction
hey , I like this idea a lot. i wish i could come up with these kind of stories. i agree with Libra Loo. it is a coming of age ...
Nov 5, 2009 -
Re: Smile - ch.1 - first timer!!
hi welcome to YWS I loved this story. The style that you write in is very good. it was free and everything seemed connected. i agree you should shorten this. ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: Prologue- I'm there for you
hey i liked this story a lot. kinda cliche but its great and i loved your style and its true boys just don't cry in public its just there thing. ...
Oct 9, 2009 -
Re: Sleeping Beauty - Part 3 [END] [Stella's Contest]
hey im here to review, what a funny take on one of my favourite storys. by the way this is like me judging the entire story because i really dont ...
Oct 3, 2009 -
Re: Mrs Jones - Chapter 9
Hey heffa89, haven't seen you in along time. god you've had me on a cliffhanger. ive been waiting so long to find out what happens next. and david deserves whatever ...
Oct 1, 2009 -
Re: Mother, May I?
Hey evi , i really don't have much to say but i had to congratulate you. i love this idea. i mean it was great also nice ending. bye are ...
Sep 28, 2009 -
Re: Deleted
hey i really liked this story but there are a few things i would like to comment on. the first is that i think this story is a little too ...
Sep 27, 2009 -
Re: Mrs Jones - Chapter 8
hey girl sorry i havent been up-to-date with you're other chapters(im on holiday in london) just wanted to tell you there great. greact bombshell. we really thought that David was ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: High School
hi Name: Erin Corrine Jones Gender: female Age/Year: 12 Creature: shape shifter Appearance/picture: Erin has dark black hair. her eyes are deep green and are like tunnels. once you look ...
Jun 12, 2009 -
Re: Blind - Chapter 23 part 1
hi, your back yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees i totally love this story great chapter. i like that you expressed Helen's feelings. also i don't know what it is but there is something different ...
May 27, 2009 -
Re: Mrs Jones - Chapter 4
Hi, i love this story. i mean I've totally read it from the beginning till now. its just so.... great !!. you have really good talent. i love the way ...
May 12, 2009 -
Re: my interpratation of the song:Broken strings, James Morrison
Hi guys. First time I’m posting a romance and I am a little um … scared. But this isn’t real romance just took a song and write about what I ...
May 9, 2009 -
Re: Angels
that was just ... too fantastic for words. adorable sweet painful and you think there are parents who have to struggle like this. again that was just breathtaking. lil-mizzkitty1
May 3, 2009 -
Re: stop the pain prolouge
Hi there I’m suffering from really bad writers block on my other story so I started a new one. For those of you who watch 90210 you will know that ...
Apr 27, 2009 -
Re: Those Little Glass Slippers (7)
hi. again you amaze me with your amazing story writing. i liked this chapter. what a sad girl. i really do feel sorry for her. kind of gives me the ...
Apr 14, 2009
