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  • Romantic Novels Re: Take A Chance- 7 (part one)

    Well I think imaginemymind covered all your grammar mistakes. I really liked this chapter it was really sad and interesting. I can't wait for part 2.I love this story so ...

    Dec 5, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: On this beautful night

    Hi.... Kitty here!! i liked this poem alot!! it has a very christmasy feeling. I also like your use of description. PM me if you have any queries :D Bye

    Dec 4, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: The YWS 2010 Yearbook

    Yay i got on the first page!!!!!! Hey everyone, Since the time i joined in 2008 i have seen a great improvment in my writing and i have a lot ...

    Dec 4, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Ugly Mirror, Pretty Mirror

    I have not read any of your other reviews but i think most grammer is covered. I liked this poem, i know that most people have that feeling where one ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: To all my best friends on YWS.

    Wow...You'rE just great!! It's so sweet :D.

    Nov 23, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Standing alone

    Most people have been affected by bullying so i wrote this poem for them. it's very to the point and theres no happy ending because there never is one. so ...

    Nov 11, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Take A Chance- 6

    HIIIII! I just wanted to say that i love this story and i wait for its new chapters. Keep writing :D Best wishes Kitty

    Oct 24, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Queen of the darkness

    Hey guys. this poem is a little wierd hope you like it. also one last thing between the paragraphs there are dots i want you guys to imagine these as ...

    Oct 7, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Take A Chance- 5

    Hey I quite like your story but slow down! i mean i'm just getting to know your characters an then BAM werewolves. Also he's a shape-shifter not a werewolf (sorry ...

    Oct 2, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: How did you find the Young Writers Society?

    My best friend told me about a different site (I can't remember). Then I forgot the exact site and instead found the YWS. The best mistake I ever made!! LOVE ...

    Jul 8, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Broken: Chapter One

    Hey thegirlwholived, I’m not good at grammar so I’ll tell you what I think. This is more of a prologue than a chapter. Because chapters tend to be longer and ...

    Jul 8, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Bring it on! (Open)

    Hey shubhiloves2write , I looked at your other review and I like the way you review. So I’m asking you if you would review chapter 1.1 of my novel ‘una ...

    Jun 20, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: (ch 1.1) una sola rosa, mi jardin...un solo amigo, mi mundo

    Hey everybody. This is my first post in well ages. I’m not Spanish (you might have assumed that from the title I just love the language). Title translated as 'one ...

    Jun 19, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch.8

    Yay I’m the first one to review. My heart practically skipped a beat when I saw chapter 8!! Oh god you left my heart bleeding for Anita. Poor girl and ...

    Jun 18, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch. 7

    Hey I really love this story. i love Anita she is really strong-willed and also very sweet. Prince Alex wish i could find out more about his story..Elise? loved there ...

    May 31, 2010


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