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Re: Take A Chance- 7 (part one)
Well I think imaginemymind covered all your grammar mistakes. I really liked this chapter it was really sad and interesting. I can't wait for part 2.I love this story so ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: On this beautful night
Hi.... Kitty here!! i liked this poem alot!! it has a very christmasy feeling. I also like your use of description. PM me if you have any queries :D Bye
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: The YWS 2010 Yearbook
Yay i got on the first page!!!!!! Hey everyone, Since the time i joined in 2008 i have seen a great improvment in my writing and i have a lot ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Ugly Mirror, Pretty Mirror
I have not read any of your other reviews but i think most grammer is covered. I liked this poem, i know that most people have that feeling where one ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: To all my best friends on YWS.
Wow...You'rE just great!! It's so sweet :D.
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Standing alone
Most people have been affected by bullying so i wrote this poem for them. it's very to the point and theres no happy ending because there never is one. so ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: Take A Chance- 6
HIIIII! I just wanted to say that i love this story and i wait for its new chapters. Keep writing :D Best wishes Kitty
Oct 24, 2010 -
Re: Queen of the darkness
Hey guys. this poem is a little wierd hope you like it. also one last thing between the paragraphs there are dots i want you guys to imagine these as ...
Oct 7, 2010 -
Re: Take A Chance- 5
Hey I quite like your story but slow down! i mean i'm just getting to know your characters an then BAM werewolves. Also he's a shape-shifter not a werewolf (sorry ...
Oct 2, 2010 -
Re: How did you find the Young Writers Society?
My best friend told me about a different site (I can't remember). Then I forgot the exact site and instead found the YWS. The best mistake I ever made!! LOVE ...
Jul 8, 2010 -
Re: Broken: Chapter One
Hey thegirlwholived, I’m not good at grammar so I’ll tell you what I think. This is more of a prologue than a chapter. Because chapters tend to be longer and ...
Jul 8, 2010 -
Re: Bring it on! (Open)
Hey shubhiloves2write , I looked at your other review and I like the way you review. So I’m asking you if you would review chapter 1.1 of my novel ‘una ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: (ch 1.1) una sola rosa, mi jardin...un solo amigo, mi mundo
Hey everybody. This is my first post in well ages. I’m not Spanish (you might have assumed that from the title I just love the language). Title translated as 'one ...
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch.8
Yay I’m the first one to review. My heart practically skipped a beat when I saw chapter 8!! Oh god you left my heart bleeding for Anita. Poor girl and ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch. 7
Hey I really love this story. i love Anita she is really strong-willed and also very sweet. Prince Alex wish i could find out more about his story..Elise? loved there ...
May 31, 2010
