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Re: Your Views on Homosexuality
I'm replying to this on my phone so there will be a whole lot of errors, be warned! I'm a muslim but I grew up in the UK so my ...
Feb 18, 2012 -
Re: Hear O Hear My Un-blissful Whispers
I really liked this piece and i think it's really cool you used writers block to inspire you. Kitty
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: Do you actually want a Prince Charming?
I don't think any girl could handle being with Prince Charming or Romeo because first of all their perfect. Being with someone perfect makes you feel low and jealous and ...
May 10, 2011 -
Re: Take A Chance- 12
Hi First can I just say that i'm really happy you posted a new chapter. This story is wicked! A lot didn't really happen in this chapter but I liked ...
Apr 28, 2011 -
Re: Heartbreak
*NOTE: I went back and sorted this out Hey Haylie I really liked this piece but there are just a few things I think you could improve on for.For instance ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: What I Am
Welcome to YWS! This was a powerful and gripping poem. And you got your message across in a great way. You could improve the way your lines are but that ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: Converse, Paper Airplanes & Dancing in the Rain (Chapter 2)
Hi i read your first chapter ages ago just never reviewed it... Basically i really like this story and i think it had got great potential. I love the plot ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: Queen of the darkness
Hi everyone i just wanted to thank everyone who has reviewed this poem, you've been a real help :D Kitty
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: You died, tonight.
LOL That has to be the funniest thing i've read. I really thought it was going to be a love poem and was getting ready for some sad ending then ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: The Tree
I love your poem it's theme is so inspiring. I love the motto though i do agree it does have a childish edge to it. Kitty
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: Ocean
Wow it was really nice story and you must have had a lot of talent when you were in 6th grade. I will definetly read your edited version if you ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: Chapter One part one and two
Hey kitty here, Basically i think everyone has covered most of your problems. But there was one thing i would like to say. I think you are going way too ...
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Take A Chance- 7 (Part two)
Hi theotherone, I just wrote down a really long review and then it all went. :C But nevertheless here i am. Basically out of all the chapters this one has ...
Dec 24, 2010 -
Re: The YWS 2010 Yearbook
Yay i got on the first page!!!!!! Hey everyone, Since the time i joined in 2008 i have seen a great improvment in my writing and i have a lot ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: Dark Sister
Wow this poem was so dark. Exactly the kind the poem I like. it was so dark and intriguing. From Kitty :D
Dec 5, 2010