lightofmeridian

I really enjoyed your poem, and it must have tooken time to write. It isn't quite like a love poem, but I think that the feeling is pretty good. People ...

Nice Story. :) Spelling errors, but not very noticable I agree, I think more detail around the shooting part would be better. Also, I don't quite get the last sentence. ...

Some of your sentences aren't quite clear, for an example, One day, a little girl, an evil little girl, who tried to kill her parents because they were so mean ...