life_is_for_living

What kind of music did you have in mind going under this? I liked the repetition at the end and the chorus then the bridge and the chorus again. I ...

hey! Sheldon's my hero too! :mrgreen:

First off, It's a really good set up, and the characters aren't copied from anywhere, they're themselves, if you know what I mean. Any way. Here are some improvements, ignore ...

That's really emotional. It really make you think about other people. How do you do it? If you've never felt something like that, and you can write that. :thud: It's ...

That was hilarious, I almost dyed laughing. You should write more things like that. You can just see that becoming the basis for an impressionist show.

Marcs fell into her flat exhausted and emotionally drained. Her first case as Detective Inspector was a suicide, although Marcs had a gut wrenching fear it wasn’t. Marcs had always ...

Thats really good. I like how you write and the way that you write is better than most romace writers I've read. post another soon! :D

Do you mean "in union"? I've never heard the expression "in cannon" before. is when people do something one after another, almost equally spaced time wise.

I think this is really good. :elephant: You may want to put some more descriptive elements to it, and the beginning was a little confusing, but in all it was ...

Your poem is really good. I'm crap at poems and really admire people who are good with them.

Torn and tear stained pictures laid scattered on the floor around her wicker chair, the one where he first confessed his 'love' to her. The chair itself was laden with ...

I thought the books were well written, but absolutely murdered by the film. They were dire actors and could not act. Although Stephanie Meyer is a good author, she cannot ...