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Re: Mentors and Heroes (working on the title)
this is really good :) The grammar is all good and the story is interesting. The idea about the children fighting in the orphanage is original and slightly hunger gamesish. ...
Apr 4, 2012 -
Re: Mentors and Heroes (working on the title)
this is really good Lumi. :) The grammar is all good and the story is interesting. The idea about the children fighting in the orphanage is original and slightly hunger ...
Apr 4, 2012
