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Re: Exit Sparta: Eden's introduction (Part 2)
For those who haven't read the first part yet, here's the link --> Enjoy the read and don't forget to leave a comment. THANK YOU so much! LOVE “Oh my ...
Dec 10, 2010 -
Re: Crux - Edited
His right hand he held close to his chest , guarding the chest of stolen goods, and his left swung to and fro as every fiber in his body bent ...
Dec 10, 2010 -
Re: Together Again, Part One and Two!
Totally agree with Charli! You drag me (as I usually don't really like stories like that) so deep into your plot, I just can't wait to read more! Please, please ...
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: Exit Sparta: Eden's introduction (Part I)
Thanks for the feedback. I try to change/improve what was mentioned! But as I said: THANK YOU sooooo much! LOVE
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: The Wanderer
Some days I found what I was looking for, Some days I found the opposite. I would look upon the way, The anger, The sadness, The depression, And I would ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: I met a girl today
An absolutely fascinating piece. All I can do is congratulate! From "Her eyes were grey pools of melting ice" on every line got better! I really really really like it! ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: Many Opinions Needed!!!!!
I don't think there have to be Humans in that Council. Replace them by magical forms of live, such as Elementals or something like that. It seem way more interesting ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: Exit Sparta: Eden's introduction (Part I)
Before you start reading make sure you intend to comment it! Everything else would not make me a better writer! Thank you so much! LOVE *** Twelve hours after the ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: Letters from Troy
Hello everyone! I heard it's like a tradition to write a few words about oneself so here I am. My name's Hans (like the bad guy in Inglourious Basterds), 20 ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hello, folks! As I'm a "newbie" here I just wanted to introduce myself. I've been looking for a community like this one for quite a long time and am glad ...
Dec 7, 2010
