letsPaintTheTown

... if you were looking from the window, how did you know the rain was warm? Think of these little things before you post, because it'll make a lot more ...

Ahhhh, well, you'll see why she was incredibly creeped out in the upcoming chapters. Again, if I ever find out how to do that. I've seen many people with folders ...

Thanks for the feedback once again! I added the type of pillowcase for a reason you will see... dun dun dun, haha. Well, I also really like describing things. I'm ...

I've never liked the word then. I just don't think it's a good way to start a sentence, for some reason. But thanks for the tip. :) Oh, true, true. ...

Wow, well, thank you so much for taking the time to think of how I could make this better. I know when periods are needed--but I thought the poet always ...

Well done! This was good. I just didn't really like the transition to falling in, I think, the third stanza (or was it the second? Bad memory.) for some reason.