letsPaintTheTown

5/10 if that was a turtle, i'd give you seven.

Thanks! I did do two reviews... do I have to post two reviews per story/poem I post? I'm still not sure how this works yet!

... if you were looking from the window, how did you know the rain was warm? Think of these little things before you post, because it'll make a lot more ...

Hiii! Alright, well, good story! I just have a couple corrections. Oh, by the way, I joined yesterday, and I have no idea how to make things not bold, so ...

Wow! This was awesome--I've never thought to write a poem about the death of John Lennon. I did, however, write a feature article about Lennon for my English class. It ...

Ahhhh, well, you'll see why she was incredibly creeped out in the upcoming chapters. Again, if I ever find out how to do that. I've seen many people with folders ...

Thanks for the feedback once again! I added the type of pillowcase for a reason you will see... dun dun dun, haha. Well, I also really like describing things. I'm ...

I've never liked the word then. I just don't think it's a good way to start a sentence, for some reason. But thanks for the tip. :) Oh, true, true. ...

This is the very first chapter. If you'd like to read more, I'll be posting the rest in a folder dedicated to the story (if I ever find out how ...

"Ethan! Wake up, man! We need to get on the road!" Seth shook his bandmate, finally deciding to just slap him a couple times with the pillow, safely tucked in ...

Wow, well, thank you so much for taking the time to think of how I could make this better. I know when periods are needed--but I thought the poet always ...

Hey! It's nice to meet you! I'm Jamie. I'm not exactly good at critiquing poetry, but I do stories! XD Actually, there are several twelve year olds on here (at ...

Sitting under the big willow trees All I could think of was the memories You and me laughing in the sun You and me, together as one Wondering why the ...

i'm Savannah and i am only twelve years young. You can kick me out, but my birthday is in less than a month, so i'll be back to haunt you, ...

that has got to be the cutest bear ever. If I had a choice of what bear to be eaten by, I'd choose this little sweetheart! haha, good job! you're ...