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yeah i agree it is kinda long :shock: I read it though :lol: You deffinitly have a gift of being discriptive, this isn't the kind of thing that i usually ...

This is the first story i've written in a really long time so.... it's probley not that great. Feel free to tell me what ever you think! :D ***** Michel ...

Hi! I love this story!!!! It's very addictive, i don't see any mistakes that weren't already covered, so all i can say is good job. :D

Hi!!!! I like the story idea, it's really sweet. I think it would be even better though if you were more decriptive with Mariah's feelings and went into more detail ...