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  • Lounge, The
    Re: Nate's Outburst

    Destiny, you have a problem with lying. Worse, you refer to God in your quote directly after you lied. Tell me, what exactly are you thinking? What is going through ...

    Sep 14, 2011


  • Wow, I really enjoyed reading your poem!! It's amazing and I loved the way you wrote it!!!

    Sep 11, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: Where were you on 9/11?

    I can totally relate to this, really. I was very small when this happened, and my mom was taking me to school. I don't think I even realized what it ...

    Sep 11, 2011

  • Narrative Poetry
    Re: Lipstick on His Collar

    Wow, this poem was really simple, but deep. And I really loved your imagery, you did a VERY good job writing this poem!!!

    Sep 10, 2011


  • I love part 2!!! Its the best, I can actually feel the emotions!! Good job!!

    Sep 10, 2011

  • Action/Adventure Novels
    Re: Trapped

    Wow, I think this is going to be my favorite poem of yours!!!

    Sep 9, 2011

  • General Fiction Novels
    Re: The Devorantem Animarum Chapter 3

    Wow, I really loved reading this!! My favorite chapter yet, I think, I don't know. Anyway, i really hope that you continue writing, especially this series!!!

    Sep 9, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: False Impressions Hurt

    Good job!! I really liked the way you made the whole thing a acronym. So, I just really want to say that this is the kind of poem that I ...

    Sep 8, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: In Memoriam

    Wow, I really enjoyed reading your poem!! It really asks a lot of meaningful questions that need answers, I feel strongly about this subject, too, even though I was very ...

    Sep 8, 2011

  • Lyrics
    Re: Love Army

    This poem is amazing!!! It would make a GREAT song!!!

    Sep 5, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: The Lion

    I don't like your poem, I loves it!! Really you have a GREAT sense of imagery!! There is really nothing bad that I can say about this poem, you must ...

    Aug 31, 2011


  • Wow, you write really good!! This poem just makes me feel what you must have felt while you were writing it!! Great imagery, by the way!!!! Keep writing!!!

    Aug 30, 2011

  • Lyric Poetry
    Re: soliloquy

    I absolutely loved reading your poem!! It made me think, about the things I do and say everyday that can have a bigger impact on someones tommorow!! Honestly, I loved ...

    Aug 30, 2011


  • This poem makes you think, you know!! The best kind of poems are these, really!! You did an amazing job writing your poem!!! The sun can be cruel As it ...

    Aug 30, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: Window

    I love this poem!!! Its very, very, good!! I love the way you describe an action after every word!! Nice reading this!!

    Aug 29, 2011


I'm tired of books having villains who are just villains for no reason.
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