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I thought this was rather good, post more I will be more than happy to read it ;)

Thank you very much! And yes I do plan on publishing it, I love writing too much to not do so ;) Anyways, you're all probably as tired as I ...

Thank you! :D

Ok then! Here it is! The second half of chapter 1. One more half to go! Again, sorry it's so long..you understand why...And this picks up right after the first ...

Thanks again you guys! Should I post the rest of chapter 1? That way I can get an overall opinion of it?

Thank you so much Dreami! And yes it is most certainly missing something. I need some help :(