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Thank you! :D

You're very interesting, and you and I have a lot in common. Ancient Egyptian mythology rocks. :wink:

emotion_less, I totally agree. The description was good, VERY good, but there is just way too much. I had absolutely no idea what was going on. I strongly suggest you ...

*gasps in horror* You're kidding right? I'm totally UGLY! But thanks for the compliment anyhoo!

Oh my god..can't believe I'm doing this, but here is something for you all to look at..Have fun! It's ye ol' wise one..

Ok then! Here it is! The second half of chapter 1. One more half to go! Again, sorry it's so long..you understand why...And this picks up right after the first ...

Thanks again you guys! Should I post the rest of chapter 1? That way I can get an overall opinion of it?

Thank you so much Dreami! And yes it is most certainly missing something. I need some help :(

Thanks Blackrose! I actually wrote very bad when I was eight years old, but it sure helped me build. I'd like to thank my english teacher for assigning me the ...

Ok, well, what about me? I've been writing poetry since I was 8 years old, I stopped when I was 12-13 years old. I've written 50+ poems so far, 5 ...

The one thing that got my fingers rolling on paper, was drawing a map. I drew several places and them gave them names. Now you have this big piece of ...

Ok, here it is, part of the "very" long chapter 1. I'll post the other half later, but anyways. I know I most certainly am missing something in my writings, ...

I think I wrote this in the thread for chapter 2, but be a little more descriptive. I've definetely got a picture in my head when I read this, but ...

Very well done Crysi! Your descriptions are great! However, here are somethings that may help you.. First, I think you should be add a tiny bit more descriptions, just a ...