legondre

This small chapter is possibly the most significant part of my story, and I was hoping you guys could just let me know if there is anyway to improve this. ...

R for quite a bit of profanity...just a warning, please don't yell at me. "Ok ladies, listen up here. You know what you're suppose to do. I'm only tellin' you ...

I thought this was rather good, post more I will be more than happy to read it ;)

The army! Yeah! Now that's awesome.

What career are you guys aiming for? I am very curious....I've wanted to be a Forensic Scientist since I was 12, and am currently taking every science class I can ...

Many of my friends have had sex at a "young age" I consider it as, and I frankly have learned that people take sex for granted. Sex before marriage? It ...

Thank you very much! And yes I do plan on publishing it, I love writing too much to not do so ;) Anyways, you're all probably as tired as I ...

I completely agree with you Reichieru. My story, which is named, "Legondre," is only about 47 pages. I've been writing it for about 9 months now, it's sad how my ...

Hey hey, no problem there. Blowing off stuff isn't cool, so don't worry. Wouldn't want her to...annoy you, lol.

Easter really isn't a big deal to me now. When I was a kid, I just liked to boil eggs and spend all my time coloring them and then stuffed ...

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Hey! Where's the nearest bar? What would you do if someone put red ants on your bed while sleeping?

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Deep Deep in the cave where I seek, Inside the hole where the shadows creep, Seek, Seek, the light in the deep, A noise, a sound, an end, a creak, ...

I think you shouldn't change it all! It's very beautifully written an you've done a great done showing the message. Personally I like it a lot that I wouldn't change ...