legendarycomputerpoetry

thank you for your comment! i do not intend of expanding on this. its just a little vent poem, which its meaning is exactly what you said: up to the ...

Thank you for your comment! I structured the poem physically to look like it's going down rather than up, but I see why it could be confusing. I'm practicing writing ...

Thank you very much! I'm still a beginner when writing haikus, so I don't think you're wrong when it came to counting the syllables. Hopefully, through more practice, you won't ...

Thank you! I do my best to keep the language consistent, but sometimes it slips through the cracks. Thank you for pointing it out!

Thanks! Yeah, I have trouble with that sometimes, mostly just realizing that I'm switching between tenses. I've been working on it, though!

Hi Mailice! Thank you so much for the review. I'm really happy to hear how Bernadette's characterization is well-done. It was one of my main goals while I was writing. ...

Hi Elinor! Thank you for the review. The purpose of the preface was just to have readers dip their toes into the water of this story. My first chapter felt ...