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Ok, thanks for the advice! I'll keep at it :D

Hi, you've confirmed my suspicions that it is definitely too vague. I can see how it's confusing now that you've pointed it out. I tend to assume everyone reading anything ...

I just meant that she would have something telling her she has a son and not to kick him out of the house every day. Notes written in her handwriting ...

Hi, no that's not too brutal, i agree with the points that you've made. I think i'll try and flesh it out a bit and see how that goes. Thanks ...

Ah ok, i thought that, then i thought there must be a reason for you putting it in and then i couldn't help thinking it was because she's french. I ...

Thanks for that, i hadn't heard of Daniil Kharms before. It's strange; i like it but it leaves me cold. I'll have to look into some more of his work.

If you like the look of those i can suggest loads more in the same vein. If not i won't.

Thanks for the reviews! Yeah, the present is supposed to be shoes because he lost his in the accident. Which partly happened becuase of him not tying his shoelaces. I ...

Hi, thanks for reviewing. I was trying to make out that he just doesn't remember the actual accident, as far as he knows Rachel is just some woman that comes ...