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Re: Strings
Yes! You are right about the strings being both metaphorical and physical : ) I'll probably work on Lilah's character some more, thanks for pointing that out! Thanks for your ...
Feb 8, 2016 -
Re: Strings
Thanks for pointing these things out, I'll definitely be working on them! Thanks for your review :)
Feb 8, 2016 -
Re: Strings
Thanks so much for your review!
Feb 8, 2016 -
Re: Strings
Thanks for your review! I'll definitely be making changes and adding to my story :)
Feb 8, 2016 -
Re: Imperfect Sanity
Thanks so much for your review! :)
Feb 7, 2016 -
Re: Imperfect Sanity
Thanks for the review! I'll definitely be changing that line, I like your suggestion:)
Feb 7, 2016 -
Re: Birdcage
Thanks so much for your review! I'll try to work on the repetition and expand on my descriptions. Thanks for taking the time to read through it!
Jan 9, 2016 -
Re: Dances and Quarrels
Thank you so much for your review! It means a lot to me that you spent the time to read through it : ) Also, thanks for pointing out the ...
Jan 2, 2016 -
Re: (2-Part Poem: I. In All Likeliness II. In A Movie)
COOL POEM
Dec 17, 2015
