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lebanesecat

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Strings

    Yes! You are right about the strings being both metaphorical and physical : ) I'll probably work on Lilah's character some more, thanks for pointing that out! Thanks for your ...

    Feb 8, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Strings

    Thanks for pointing these things out, I'll definitely be working on them! Thanks for your review :)

    Feb 8, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Strings

    Thanks so much for your review!

    Feb 8, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Strings

    Thanks for your review! I'll definitely be making changes and adding to my story :)

    Feb 8, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Imperfect Sanity

    Thanks so much for your review! :)

    Feb 7, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Imperfect Sanity

    Thanks for the review! I'll definitely be changing that line, I like your suggestion:)

    Feb 7, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Birdcage

    Thanks so much for your review! I'll try to work on the repetition and expand on my descriptions. Thanks for taking the time to read through it!

    Jan 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: Dances and Quarrels

    Thank you so much for your review! It means a lot to me that you spent the time to read through it : ) Also, thanks for pointing out the ...

    Jan 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: (2-Part Poem: I. In All Likeliness II. In A Movie)

    COOL POEM

    Dec 17, 2015


There is hopeful symbolism in the fact that flags do not wave in a vacuum.
— Arthur C. Clarke