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Thanks both of those help a lot i'll be sure to use more imagery!

But really? Does she think that what I said was true?That he was actually cheating on me?That I was denying what has been?That I don’t love him like I do?Like ...

It should be I breathe* if you want to change that. The tulips have been blooming,Pushing through the mulch of earth,Along with the other blooms of Life. < my favorite ...

Very good and i like the way you used ()'s with each oh brother dear.

thank you helps me a lot!!

Try to be normal, never works anyway ^^ Great line. And great ending.

Use more descriptive words. Well written though.

Something about striving to succeed and moving up because you mention...succeed, talent, passion, taught, to climb. Hope it helps!

My feelings are brittle. My heart is cold. Why don’t you care? I’m powerless to stop. It’s lingering inside. Why can’t you hold me? I can still feel you. I ...